Remember when I said I had a spin-off in for the Rhiannon's Law books? Well, make that two. Bane is a character who showed up out of nowhere. I'm not sure how his story will fit into the universe (I'm thinking it will be erotic romance) but we'll see. I figured I'd share him with you. He's rough around the edges, which means I like him. I hope you like him too. He gives as good as he gets, and Rhiannon isn't sure what to think.
Without further ado. Meet Bane:
*As always, please excuse typos. This is the unedited version of the manuscript.*
The Ripple Effect Excerpt:
Bane was waiting for me when I arrived at Cleaver’s Pizza, standing beside a van parked around the back. He was dressed casually in jeans, a T-shirt, and a black baseball cap—probably to blend in with the locals. No one paid me any attention as I walked alongside the building and stopped at the back of the vehicle. Bane walked around to greet me, giving me a brief nod.
Alrighty then. So far, so good.
At some point in his life I was certain Bane had been a decent looking guy. He was over six feet tall — all muscle — and had a heart stopping smile that went nicely with his ice-blue eyes and blond hair. Unfortunately his nose had been broken numerous times, and a winding scar from his forehead to his chin ruined him from the neck up. If the puckered tissue bothered him, he didn’t let on. He appeared to be comfortable in his own skin. Hell, I was almost positive he enjoyed frightening people with a sadistic sneer that made the scar stretch and widen.
“I see you made it,” he said. No smile, no hello—only a level stare.
“It didn’t sound like I was being given a choice.”
Bane snorted, glanced around, and pulled the back doors to the van open. As promised two Brownings were side by side on the dingy flooring, their obsidian metal clean and unscratched. Four clips were lined above the guns—fully loaded—and two boxes of bullets were placed beside them. Just above that was a double holster, the matching leather free of markings.
“May I?” I motioned to the back of the van and waited.
“Be my guest.”
I moved closer, so someone outside wouldn’t be able to see what I was doing, and checked each sidearm. They were just as good up close, if not better. Bane had a solid reputation, so I wasn’t worried about the quality. The guns would shoot straight, and their aim would be dead-on. Of that, I was positive. There was, however, the matter of money.
“How much?”
“A grand each.”
“You’re sure they’re clean?”
He nodded. “Totally untraceable.
“If you include the ammo, we have a deal.”
His grin told me he was going to barter. “The guns and ammo for three grand. Custom rounds aren’t cheap.”
I would have bargained, but I was short on time. I had to get home, figure out a way to store the weapons and ammo, and pack my things before Goose arrived.
“Deal.” I put the guns on the soft mat inside the van. “I’m going to step inside Cleaver’s and get your money.”
“Not so fast.” Bane clucked his tongue. He reached inside the van and pulled away a piece of cloth, revealing a large, gleaming sidearm. It was a thing of beauty, with an unmarred chrome barrel and a beautiful, hard black plastic grip.
I’ll be damned. Bane had gotten his hands on a Desert Eagle.
“It’s clean as the others and more powerful. Want to kiss someone good-bye? This is the way to do it.”
I lifted the gun, and it felt perfect in my hand. Just heavy enough to know it was there but light enough not to be a bother. “Do you have silver rounds?”
“Usually I don’t bother with questions, but one day I’m going to ask about your obsession with silver.” He reached inside and produced two large boxes. “How about some fifty action express?”
“How many bullets per box?” I took a glance down the barrel, taking in the craftsmanship.
“Fifty.”
“And if I need more?”
“You know where to find me.”
True enough. “How much?”
“Two grand. Non-negotiable.”
No way could I go there, even if I wanted to.
Two thousand dollars.
I couldn’t afford the Brownings and the Eagle. I’d only brought four thousand in cash with me, leaving me a grand short. The rest of the money I’d received from Disco as a monthly allowance had been tucked away in a safety deposit box. I wasn’t sure if I’d need it, but I wasn’t willing to piss it all away on side arms.
“I’ll take the Eagle and the rounds.” I placed the gun on the mat and started to make my way to Cleaver’s to dig the money out of my shoe.
Bane frowned, and damn if it wasn’t a terrifying sight. “You don’t want the others?”
“I can’t afford it.” I glanced at the Brownings. They’d be nice to have, but the Eagle would put a hole in a vampire—or a demon’s—chest. I needed that kind of firepower. The amulet and Sucker only got me so far.
“How much do you got?” He studied me, starting at my head and working his ways to my toes, taking his time.
I couldn’t bite back my temper or stop my smartass mouth this time. “If you’re asking if I’m willing to work off the remainder of the cost with a piece of my ass, piss off.”
He narrowed his eyes. “Don’t flatter yourself, princess. Believe me when I say that you’re not my type. Don’t make me ask again. How much do you got?”
It was dangerous confessing how much money I had on me, but since Marigold’s amulet was around my neck, I figured I would be able to defend myself and my cash if it came down to it.
“Four thousand.”
“A grand short.”
Well hello, Captain Obvious. “I’m aware of that, which is why I said I’d take the Eagle.”
He moved closer and gazed down at me. “A woman shouldn’t have to have a gun to take care of herself. You need a man to protect you.”
Arching my neck, I looked directly into his light blue eyes. “That’s your problem right there. I don’t want a man.”
To my shock, his hard face softened. “Your soul has been carved out. I can see it in your eyes.”
Looking away was my only defense. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“Yes, you do. When you want to talk, give me a call. I’ve been around a long time and have seen more than you might think.” He waited until I glanced at him to add, “No strings. Just someone to talk to. I wasn’t kidding when I said you’re not my type. No bullshit.”
**
He's a fun character -- and NO he's not a love interest. He means it when he says he has no interest in Rhiannon. I'm jotting ideas down ideas for him now. I hope to start on his book either late this year or in the Spring. :)
Monday, March 26, 2012
Meet Bane: The Ripple Effect
Sunday, March 25, 2012
Changing a MS -- Crimson Moon
I've gotten a few comments/emails about the revised edition of Crimson Moon and how I'm changing the manuscript. Let me start by saying this: The story will remain the same. However, the book does have issues and I want to strengthen the material if at all possible. How? It's a combination of cutting, revising, and re-writing. If you're curious, I've included two snippets below. You can see what I'm up to and what you can expect.
**I've intentionally chosen the scene I based this story from. I had a vision in my head while driving one day and came home and started writing.**
Old Version:
“Get behind me.”
Caleb’s voice was the most welcome thing my ears had ever heard. I did as instructed, slowly stepping backward. I didn’t break eye contact with the two creatures snarling and snapping, too horrified to look away.
Caleb’s large silhouette appeared in the corner of my left eye. He came around, closing the distance and providing a barrier from the two werewolves ready to shred me apart if presented the opportunity. They snarled louder, growls becoming vicious and angry, matching their non-human lupine faces.
One launched forward, throwing a punch which Caleb deflected harmlessly. The other attempted to deliver a blow as well, aiming for the midsection. Caleb maneuvered effortlessly out of the way, keeping his body in place, continuing to separate them from me. They persisted, making small passes, waiting for an opportunity to strike.
They chose to move together, the one on the left striking out while the one to the right tackled Caleb into the sand. They began to hit him violently, fists flying.
I glanced around in panic, searching for anything I could use. The ladder caught my attention.
If I could be fast enough, and pull a piece free, I could use it as a weapon.
I started forward, unsure of what to do but unable to bear standing by to watch the carnage.
A firm hand gripped my shoulder, startling me.
“Don’t do that darlin’,” Billy whispered. “A man’s got to have his pride.”
I watched helplessly as Caleb attempted to deflect the blows that rained down on his shoulders and back. I averted my head and closed my eyes, fighting back sickness.
I didn’t want to see Caleb’s blood staining the walls and sand.
Energy surged through the pit, brushing painfully across my skin, nearly knocking me over. I gasped and stumbled, remaining on my feet by Billy’s hand locked onto my shoulder. A deep growl rent the air and the force in the room intensified and shifted. The hair on my arms stood on end as the crowd above erupted into absolute chaos.
I opened my eyes and glanced up.
The rail was completely full now, bodies surging against the railing to watch. Men and women stared down, snarling and cheering, their words mangled and distorted.
The blonde girl who knocked me over was still there. Her eyes—like all the others—glowed strangely and shifted color. Her lips quavered as she chanted along with everyone else.
I glanced back down, searching for the source of the growl.
Caleb was no longer on the ground. His body contorted under his black t-shirt, the muscles in his arms expanding as his body grew and doubled in size. I gasped at the incomprehensible thing I was witnessing and Billy patted my shoulder in understanding.
“It’s all right. He’s a big boy, and they done pissed him off.”
Caleb punched the one on his right, sending him reeling through the air, his body making solid contact with the bloodied wall. A nasty crunch vibrated in my ears and he crumpled unmoving to the sand.
Caleb moved swiftly, rushing the other werewolf and grasping him by the throat. He forced him back, pushing his body against the blood stained wall.
The sound in the room increased, voices mingling together. People yelled out frantically, tones garbled and thick.
The werewolf kicked feebly as he used his arms, attempting to deliver blows to get free. Caleb deflected each with his free hand, until the movements became sluggish and uncoordinated, before coming to a stop all together.
Caleb stepped back, releasing his hold and opening his fingers. The man crumbled to the ground, legs dropping from underneath as he slumped. The crowd erupted in cheers as the energy eased from of the pit.
I sighed in relief. My skin wasn’t tingling painfully under the jacket any longer.
“See, no harm done,” Billy offered comfortingly, removing his steadying hand.
I watched Caleb’s back. His arms slowly receded, muscles returning to normal. His frame shifted and his bones cracked into place. I envisioned him closing his eyes, taking deep and measured breaths as he fought that struggle within. He lifted his arms, raking hands through his thick hair. He turned around, brushing the sand free from his shirt and keeping his eyes downcast as he approached.
He was embarrassed. For some reason, having me witness this upset him.
“Thank you,” I whispered.
Emotion strained my voice and I smiled at him, crossing the space between us. He lifted his chin, gazing at me, shimmering ice blue staring back. It was different than the indigo I’d grown used to, but lovely nonetheless.
He waited until I was inches away and he reached for me, lightly touching my arm.
His voice was thick and hoarse. “We should make this look legitimate.”
He didn’t give me the opportunity to consider his words as he bent down, wrapping his arm around my waist and lifting me against his chest. His head bent as his mouth found my own.
If I thought Caleb smelled delicious, he tasted even better. His lips were full and soft as they brushed against mine, and my reserve melted away.
I lifted my arms around his shoulders, hands entwining in silken hair. I lost myself in the strange and irresistible pull that existed between us. I had only kissed one other person in my life, and the experience didn’t even compare.
Everything but Caleb fell away in that moment.
It was just him and I, our bodies impossibly close together.
“That a girl.” Billy’s voice barely registered in my ears. “I’d say he earned it.”
New Version:
“Get behind me.”
Caleb’s voice was the most welcome thing I had ever heard. I did as instructed, slowly stepping backward. I didn’t break eye contact with the two creatures snarling at me, too horrified to look away. Caleb’s large silhouette appeared in the corner of my eye. He came around, providing a barrier from the two werewolves ready to shred me to pieces if given an opportunity. They snarled louder, growls becoming vicious, matching their lupine faces.
One threw a punch which Caleb deflected harmlessly. The other attempted to deliver a blow as well, aiming for Caleb’s midsection. Caleb stepped effortlessly out of the way but kept his body in place, separating them from me. They persisted, making small passes, waiting for an opportunity to strike. The one on the left lashed out and the one to the right tackled Caleb to the sand. They started to hit him brutally, fists flying.
I glanced around in panic, searching for anything I could use. The ladder caught my attention. If I could pull a piece free, I could use it as a weapon. I started forward, unsure of what to do but unable to stand by and watch the carnage.
A firm hand gripped my shoulder, startling me.
“Don’t do that darlin’,” Billy said softly. “A man’s got to have his pride.”
I watched helplessly as Caleb attempted to deflect the blows that rained down on his shoulders and back. I averted my head and closed my eyes, fighting back sickness.
I didn’t want to see Caleb’s blood staining the walls and sand.
Energy surged through the pit, brushing painfully across my skin, nearly knocking me over. I gasped and stumbled, remaining on my feet with Billy’s help. A deep growl rent the air. The pandemonium in the room intensified and shifted. The hair on my arms stood on end as the crowd erupted in absolute chaos.
I opened my eyes and glanced up.
The rail was completely full now, people surging against the railing. Men and women stared down, snarling and cheering, their words distorted. The blonde girl who’d knocked me over was still there. Her eyes—like all the others—glowed strangely and shifted color. Her lips quivered as she chanted along with everyone else. I lowered my gaze and searched for the source of the growl that drowned out the noises in the room.
Oh my God.
Caleb. The noise was coming from Caleb.
And he was no longer on the ground.
His body contorted under his black T-shirt, the muscles in his arms bulging as his body doubled in size. I gasped at the incomprehensible thing I was witnessing and Billy patted my shoulder.
“It’s all right. He’s a big boy, and they done pissed him off.”
Caleb punched the one on his right in the chest, sending the man reeling through the air. His body made solid contact with the bloodied wall. A nasty snap vibrated in my ears and he crumbled unmoving to the sand.
Caleb moved swiftly, rushing the other werewolf and grasping him by the throat. He forced the man back, pushing his body against the blood stained wall. The sound in the room increased, voices mingling together. People yelled out, eager for blood. The werewolf kicked feebly as he used his arms, attempting to deliver blows to get free. Caleb deflected each with his free hand, until the man’s movements became sluggish. Before long the werewolf’s arms fell to his sides and he slumped.
Caleb stepped back, releasing his hold. The man sank to the ground, legs folding as he hit the sand. The crowd erupted in cheers, and the strange energy I felt eased from of the pit. I sighed in relief, my skin no longer tingling under the jacket.
“See, no harm done,” Billy said and let me go.
I watched Caleb’s back. The muscles in his arms slowly receded and returned to normal. His frame shifted and his bones cracked into place. I envisioned him closing his eyes, taking deep and measured breaths as he fought for control. He lifted his arms and raked his hands through his hair. When he turned around, he brushed sand from his shirt and walked toward me and Billy, keeping his eyes lowered.
He’s embarrassed.
For some reason having me witness this upset him.
“Thank you,” I whispered, emotion straining my voice.
Caleb lifted his head and gazed at me with shimmering ice blue eyes. The color was different than the indigo I’d grown used to, but lovely nonetheless. He waited until I was inches away before he reached out and touched my arm.
“We should make this look legitimate.”
He didn’t give me the opportunity to consider his words as he bent down, wrapping his arm around my waist and lifting me against his chest. His head bent and his mouth descended.
If I thought Caleb smelled delicious, he tasted even better. His lips were full and soft as they pressed against mine, and my reserve melted away. I looped my arms around his neck, my hands gliding into his silken hair. I lost myself in the strange and irresistible pull that existed between us. I had only kissed one other person in my life, and the experience didn’t even compare.
Everything but Caleb fell away in that moment.
It was just the two of us, our bodies impossibly close together.
“That a girl.” Billy’s voice barely registered, seeming far away. “I’d say he earned it.”
***
I hope you enjoy the new version. I'm busting my arse to get the manuscript in order. Please forgive any typos you might find. This is version zero. After I wrap this up the book will be off to my CPs and Betas and then I'll give the MS another go.
**I've intentionally chosen the scene I based this story from. I had a vision in my head while driving one day and came home and started writing.**
Old Version:
“Get behind me.”
Caleb’s voice was the most welcome thing my ears had ever heard. I did as instructed, slowly stepping backward. I didn’t break eye contact with the two creatures snarling and snapping, too horrified to look away.
Caleb’s large silhouette appeared in the corner of my left eye. He came around, closing the distance and providing a barrier from the two werewolves ready to shred me apart if presented the opportunity. They snarled louder, growls becoming vicious and angry, matching their non-human lupine faces.
One launched forward, throwing a punch which Caleb deflected harmlessly. The other attempted to deliver a blow as well, aiming for the midsection. Caleb maneuvered effortlessly out of the way, keeping his body in place, continuing to separate them from me. They persisted, making small passes, waiting for an opportunity to strike.
They chose to move together, the one on the left striking out while the one to the right tackled Caleb into the sand. They began to hit him violently, fists flying.
I glanced around in panic, searching for anything I could use. The ladder caught my attention.
If I could be fast enough, and pull a piece free, I could use it as a weapon.
I started forward, unsure of what to do but unable to bear standing by to watch the carnage.
A firm hand gripped my shoulder, startling me.
“Don’t do that darlin’,” Billy whispered. “A man’s got to have his pride.”
I watched helplessly as Caleb attempted to deflect the blows that rained down on his shoulders and back. I averted my head and closed my eyes, fighting back sickness.
I didn’t want to see Caleb’s blood staining the walls and sand.
Energy surged through the pit, brushing painfully across my skin, nearly knocking me over. I gasped and stumbled, remaining on my feet by Billy’s hand locked onto my shoulder. A deep growl rent the air and the force in the room intensified and shifted. The hair on my arms stood on end as the crowd above erupted into absolute chaos.
I opened my eyes and glanced up.
The rail was completely full now, bodies surging against the railing to watch. Men and women stared down, snarling and cheering, their words mangled and distorted.
The blonde girl who knocked me over was still there. Her eyes—like all the others—glowed strangely and shifted color. Her lips quavered as she chanted along with everyone else.
I glanced back down, searching for the source of the growl.
Caleb was no longer on the ground. His body contorted under his black t-shirt, the muscles in his arms expanding as his body grew and doubled in size. I gasped at the incomprehensible thing I was witnessing and Billy patted my shoulder in understanding.
“It’s all right. He’s a big boy, and they done pissed him off.”
Caleb punched the one on his right, sending him reeling through the air, his body making solid contact with the bloodied wall. A nasty crunch vibrated in my ears and he crumpled unmoving to the sand.
Caleb moved swiftly, rushing the other werewolf and grasping him by the throat. He forced him back, pushing his body against the blood stained wall.
The sound in the room increased, voices mingling together. People yelled out frantically, tones garbled and thick.
The werewolf kicked feebly as he used his arms, attempting to deliver blows to get free. Caleb deflected each with his free hand, until the movements became sluggish and uncoordinated, before coming to a stop all together.
Caleb stepped back, releasing his hold and opening his fingers. The man crumbled to the ground, legs dropping from underneath as he slumped. The crowd erupted in cheers as the energy eased from of the pit.
I sighed in relief. My skin wasn’t tingling painfully under the jacket any longer.
“See, no harm done,” Billy offered comfortingly, removing his steadying hand.
I watched Caleb’s back. His arms slowly receded, muscles returning to normal. His frame shifted and his bones cracked into place. I envisioned him closing his eyes, taking deep and measured breaths as he fought that struggle within. He lifted his arms, raking hands through his thick hair. He turned around, brushing the sand free from his shirt and keeping his eyes downcast as he approached.
He was embarrassed. For some reason, having me witness this upset him.
“Thank you,” I whispered.
Emotion strained my voice and I smiled at him, crossing the space between us. He lifted his chin, gazing at me, shimmering ice blue staring back. It was different than the indigo I’d grown used to, but lovely nonetheless.
He waited until I was inches away and he reached for me, lightly touching my arm.
His voice was thick and hoarse. “We should make this look legitimate.”
He didn’t give me the opportunity to consider his words as he bent down, wrapping his arm around my waist and lifting me against his chest. His head bent as his mouth found my own.
If I thought Caleb smelled delicious, he tasted even better. His lips were full and soft as they brushed against mine, and my reserve melted away.
I lifted my arms around his shoulders, hands entwining in silken hair. I lost myself in the strange and irresistible pull that existed between us. I had only kissed one other person in my life, and the experience didn’t even compare.
Everything but Caleb fell away in that moment.
It was just him and I, our bodies impossibly close together.
“That a girl.” Billy’s voice barely registered in my ears. “I’d say he earned it.”
New Version:
“Get behind me.”
Caleb’s voice was the most welcome thing I had ever heard. I did as instructed, slowly stepping backward. I didn’t break eye contact with the two creatures snarling at me, too horrified to look away. Caleb’s large silhouette appeared in the corner of my eye. He came around, providing a barrier from the two werewolves ready to shred me to pieces if given an opportunity. They snarled louder, growls becoming vicious, matching their lupine faces.
One threw a punch which Caleb deflected harmlessly. The other attempted to deliver a blow as well, aiming for Caleb’s midsection. Caleb stepped effortlessly out of the way but kept his body in place, separating them from me. They persisted, making small passes, waiting for an opportunity to strike. The one on the left lashed out and the one to the right tackled Caleb to the sand. They started to hit him brutally, fists flying.
I glanced around in panic, searching for anything I could use. The ladder caught my attention. If I could pull a piece free, I could use it as a weapon. I started forward, unsure of what to do but unable to stand by and watch the carnage.
A firm hand gripped my shoulder, startling me.
“Don’t do that darlin’,” Billy said softly. “A man’s got to have his pride.”
I watched helplessly as Caleb attempted to deflect the blows that rained down on his shoulders and back. I averted my head and closed my eyes, fighting back sickness.
I didn’t want to see Caleb’s blood staining the walls and sand.
Energy surged through the pit, brushing painfully across my skin, nearly knocking me over. I gasped and stumbled, remaining on my feet with Billy’s help. A deep growl rent the air. The pandemonium in the room intensified and shifted. The hair on my arms stood on end as the crowd erupted in absolute chaos.
I opened my eyes and glanced up.
The rail was completely full now, people surging against the railing. Men and women stared down, snarling and cheering, their words distorted. The blonde girl who’d knocked me over was still there. Her eyes—like all the others—glowed strangely and shifted color. Her lips quivered as she chanted along with everyone else. I lowered my gaze and searched for the source of the growl that drowned out the noises in the room.
Oh my God.
Caleb. The noise was coming from Caleb.
And he was no longer on the ground.
His body contorted under his black T-shirt, the muscles in his arms bulging as his body doubled in size. I gasped at the incomprehensible thing I was witnessing and Billy patted my shoulder.
“It’s all right. He’s a big boy, and they done pissed him off.”
Caleb punched the one on his right in the chest, sending the man reeling through the air. His body made solid contact with the bloodied wall. A nasty snap vibrated in my ears and he crumbled unmoving to the sand.
Caleb moved swiftly, rushing the other werewolf and grasping him by the throat. He forced the man back, pushing his body against the blood stained wall. The sound in the room increased, voices mingling together. People yelled out, eager for blood. The werewolf kicked feebly as he used his arms, attempting to deliver blows to get free. Caleb deflected each with his free hand, until the man’s movements became sluggish. Before long the werewolf’s arms fell to his sides and he slumped.
Caleb stepped back, releasing his hold. The man sank to the ground, legs folding as he hit the sand. The crowd erupted in cheers, and the strange energy I felt eased from of the pit. I sighed in relief, my skin no longer tingling under the jacket.
“See, no harm done,” Billy said and let me go.
I watched Caleb’s back. The muscles in his arms slowly receded and returned to normal. His frame shifted and his bones cracked into place. I envisioned him closing his eyes, taking deep and measured breaths as he fought for control. He lifted his arms and raked his hands through his hair. When he turned around, he brushed sand from his shirt and walked toward me and Billy, keeping his eyes lowered.
He’s embarrassed.
For some reason having me witness this upset him.
“Thank you,” I whispered, emotion straining my voice.
Caleb lifted his head and gazed at me with shimmering ice blue eyes. The color was different than the indigo I’d grown used to, but lovely nonetheless. He waited until I was inches away before he reached out and touched my arm.
“We should make this look legitimate.”
He didn’t give me the opportunity to consider his words as he bent down, wrapping his arm around my waist and lifting me against his chest. His head bent and his mouth descended.
If I thought Caleb smelled delicious, he tasted even better. His lips were full and soft as they pressed against mine, and my reserve melted away. I looped my arms around his neck, my hands gliding into his silken hair. I lost myself in the strange and irresistible pull that existed between us. I had only kissed one other person in my life, and the experience didn’t even compare.
Everything but Caleb fell away in that moment.
It was just the two of us, our bodies impossibly close together.
“That a girl.” Billy’s voice barely registered, seeming far away. “I’d say he earned it.”
***
I hope you enjoy the new version. I'm busting my arse to get the manuscript in order. Please forgive any typos you might find. This is version zero. After I wrap this up the book will be off to my CPs and Betas and then I'll give the MS another go.
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Crimson Trilogy,
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Saturday, March 24, 2012
New Crimson Moon Cover Art
I received my cover art for Crimson Moon today. I hired the fabulous cover artist Skyla Dawn Cameron and told her what I wanted. She gave me everything I asked for and more. I'm excited to go back and work on the book. Since it was my first novel, there are several places that needed to be revised and trimmed. The hope is the new version will read faster and smoother. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
Look for the book to release on May 15th (prior to the release of Crimson Sunrise). It'll be on several retail outlets, in eBook formats and print. Thanks again for all your support. I couldn't do this without you.
Back to work for me. I'm so swamped. This month has been incredibly draining. Have a fantastic weekend!
Look for the book to release on May 15th (prior to the release of Crimson Sunrise). It'll be on several retail outlets, in eBook formats and print. Thanks again for all your support. I couldn't do this without you.
Back to work for me. I'm so swamped. This month has been incredibly draining. Have a fantastic weekend!
Monday, March 19, 2012
Future Works & What's at Stake
**As a forward -- I didn't want to post this. The numerous requests/emails about The Ripple Effect and Edge of Darkness prompted the post. Thank you in advance.**
When I started writing in 2008, it was for ME. I'd spoken with my husband when I got pregnant with our first child and the decision we made was simple: I'd stay home with our children until they started school. Afterward I'd finish my degree and get my ass to work. Not a hard concept. I had no idea I'd venture into publishing, or I'd try to make a career out of it.
The truth is this: Indie authors (not self-published, which is an entirely different topic) don't get an advance. We don't make money prior to any books selling. We sign a contract with a publisher, edit the book and pray to God that we make money when the book releases. It's a game of cat and mouse, with luck playing a huge part. Will we make decent money? Will our books tank? It's anyone's guess.
In my case I promoted the hell outta Dead, Undead, or Somewhere in Between. As a result (and with a bit of Lady Luck) I built a name for myself. It wasn't easy. I spent months working on promo and writing the second book in the series nearly killed me. Despite fluctuating sales, I continued on and wrote The Ripple Effect.
Which brings me to this post.
Many have asked about the fourth book in the series: Edge of Darkness. I have a decent idea where things are going and I've started plotting out the story (which, as a pantser, is hard). Otherwise I haven't written a word of the manuscript. Why?
Sales.
As hard as it is to confess, the Rhiannon's Law series is my most heavily pirated work (and most abundantly shared). For the most part, readers seem to enjoy the books -- so long as they're free. At first I accepted this, knowing I needed to make as much cash (no matter how small) as I could. Then I started writing under Aline Hunter and discovered a whole new world existed, one in which people would purchase my work and appreciate me far more.
Is this to say my erotic romance readers are preferable to my urban fantasy ones? Not at all. It's simply to state that I have four children to take care for and this is business. I have to do what is in the best interest of my family. If that means writing erotic romance, I'll write erotic romance. Urban fantasy, no matter how much I love it, will take the back burner. As it is I try to write one Rhiannon's book per year (the books drain me) but depending on the release of The Ripple Effect and sales, that could change.
Unlike New York authors, small press ones don't get money up front. Our income is totally reliant on each and every book sold. It's important for people to realize what is at stake here. Do I want to nag? No, of course not. However, the abundance of those who've contacted me asking for ARCs have to understand where I'm coming from (and the ARCs for The Ripple Effect are limited -- it's a decision I made with my publisher). If you don't buy my books, I won't be able to keep writing them. It's not rocket science; it's simple math.
Now, with that said, I do hope you enjoy the third book. I'm looking forward to writing the fourth. Unfortunately this year is swamped with the books that do support my family. I wish I could write to make everyone happy. I wish I could write and share my stories for free. The truth is I gave up that right when I had children. They deserve more and, as their mother, I will give them more. It's my duty as a parent to look out for them. Just like those who enjoy reading, I have to make living. Thus is the stuff of life.
It's back to work for me. I have several projects lined up this year and time is short. I hope you're all doing well and enjoying the Spring.
As a side: To those of you patiently waiting to buy The Ripple Effect when it releases -- my sincerest thanks, really, for all of you who do support me. You are the reason I can continue writing, and I can't thank you enough. I hope the book is worth the wait. Hopefully I can continue writing the series. I truly hope so. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
When I started writing in 2008, it was for ME. I'd spoken with my husband when I got pregnant with our first child and the decision we made was simple: I'd stay home with our children until they started school. Afterward I'd finish my degree and get my ass to work. Not a hard concept. I had no idea I'd venture into publishing, or I'd try to make a career out of it.
The truth is this: Indie authors (not self-published, which is an entirely different topic) don't get an advance. We don't make money prior to any books selling. We sign a contract with a publisher, edit the book and pray to God that we make money when the book releases. It's a game of cat and mouse, with luck playing a huge part. Will we make decent money? Will our books tank? It's anyone's guess.
In my case I promoted the hell outta Dead, Undead, or Somewhere in Between. As a result (and with a bit of Lady Luck) I built a name for myself. It wasn't easy. I spent months working on promo and writing the second book in the series nearly killed me. Despite fluctuating sales, I continued on and wrote The Ripple Effect.
Which brings me to this post.
Many have asked about the fourth book in the series: Edge of Darkness. I have a decent idea where things are going and I've started plotting out the story (which, as a pantser, is hard). Otherwise I haven't written a word of the manuscript. Why?
Sales.
As hard as it is to confess, the Rhiannon's Law series is my most heavily pirated work (and most abundantly shared). For the most part, readers seem to enjoy the books -- so long as they're free. At first I accepted this, knowing I needed to make as much cash (no matter how small) as I could. Then I started writing under Aline Hunter and discovered a whole new world existed, one in which people would purchase my work and appreciate me far more.
Is this to say my erotic romance readers are preferable to my urban fantasy ones? Not at all. It's simply to state that I have four children to take care for and this is business. I have to do what is in the best interest of my family. If that means writing erotic romance, I'll write erotic romance. Urban fantasy, no matter how much I love it, will take the back burner. As it is I try to write one Rhiannon's book per year (the books drain me) but depending on the release of The Ripple Effect and sales, that could change.
Unlike New York authors, small press ones don't get money up front. Our income is totally reliant on each and every book sold. It's important for people to realize what is at stake here. Do I want to nag? No, of course not. However, the abundance of those who've contacted me asking for ARCs have to understand where I'm coming from (and the ARCs for The Ripple Effect are limited -- it's a decision I made with my publisher). If you don't buy my books, I won't be able to keep writing them. It's not rocket science; it's simple math.
Now, with that said, I do hope you enjoy the third book. I'm looking forward to writing the fourth. Unfortunately this year is swamped with the books that do support my family. I wish I could write to make everyone happy. I wish I could write and share my stories for free. The truth is I gave up that right when I had children. They deserve more and, as their mother, I will give them more. It's my duty as a parent to look out for them. Just like those who enjoy reading, I have to make living. Thus is the stuff of life.
It's back to work for me. I have several projects lined up this year and time is short. I hope you're all doing well and enjoying the Spring.
As a side: To those of you patiently waiting to buy The Ripple Effect when it releases -- my sincerest thanks, really, for all of you who do support me. You are the reason I can continue writing, and I can't thank you enough. I hope the book is worth the wait. Hopefully I can continue writing the series. I truly hope so. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
Saturday, March 17, 2012
Impromptu Contest
I recently received a few copies of Eternity and a Day in print and thought...why not do a giveaway? Do you want to enter? It's not difficult. Go to my Facebook author page and leave a comment (you'll see the post -- it's on the top):
https://www.facebook.com/JASaare.AlineHunter
I'll pick a winner on Monday using Random.org.
Hope you're enjoying a great weekend!
https://www.facebook.com/JASaare.AlineHunter
I'll pick a winner on Monday using Random.org.
Hope you're enjoying a great weekend!
Labels:
Contests,
Eternity and a Day,
Loose Id
Thursday, March 8, 2012
Enemy Mine Cover is here!
I was thrilled when I received my cover this morning. The artist (Irene -- thank you!) gave me exactly what I wanted. No release date yet, but as soon as I get one I'll share. Hopefully it won't be much longer.
Hope you're all doing well and enjoying a great week.
Hope you're all doing well and enjoying a great week.
Labels:
Alpha and Omega Shifters,
Ellora's Cave,
Enemy Mine
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